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Si'Andregal Grungolash
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Posted - 2011.05.02 11:41:00 -
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Originally by: Varcaus Edited by: Varcaus on 02/05/2011 02:44:34
Originally by: Tekedo Terra Waugh: I like your pose but you could use some better lighting/be closer to the camera. You seem to get lost in the background a bit. Overall 6.5/10
look like you banged your head into the camera 7/10
9.5/10 I love your character's personality. She looks like she knows how to have fun, but there's a sense that she's not one to be messed with either.
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Si'Andregal Grungolash
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Posted - 2011.06.18 04:35:00 -
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Originally by: Trig Onami 9.31415/10
That is all.
8.4/10
All, that is
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Si'Andregal Grungolash
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Posted - 2011.08.29 05:12:00 -
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Cynter DeVries
6/10 Pose is okay, somewhat seductive. Breast size uncomfortably large to the point of grotesque. A composition with blatant emphasis on the breast becomes corny. Lighting and facial structure makes character appear flat faced and hollow cheeked. Not sure if the background compliments the character.
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Si'Andregal Grungolash
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Posted - 2011.08.29 09:13:00 -
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Shizu Eisenkreuz
7/10
I can recognize the effect you're aiming to achieve by placing the eyeline where the streak of light is. The result would certainly be effective however the composition throws the balance of the image, The composition would have benefited from the character filling up more of the vertical space. Unfortunately the BG cannot be adjusted and the intended effect would not be the same. I am not sure the stark colour contrast actually is the best choice. Sometimes a closer colour palette pulls the image off better.
I do admire your character, your choice of clothing and hairstyle is well made.
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Si'Andregal Grungolash
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Posted - 2011.08.29 11:38:00 -
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Originally by: Poetic Stanziel BigBoyal - You have something in your eye. A bland pose. And nothing about the character that shouts any originality. 5/10.
7/10 Frankly, the neck looks broken. It's a very unnatural position for the neck, less tilt may solve the problem. I'm sorry but I really do not think you have that pose right, and it's very noticeable, at least for me. Otherwise, a fine minmatar girl.
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Si'Andregal Grungolash
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Posted - 2011.08.29 13:46:00 -
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Ishtanchuk Fazmarai
8.5/10
Very admirable woman you present yourself as, she has class and seems charismatic, and can be seen to be knowledgeable and experienced. Composition and pose is also good. Expression is a bit hard to decipher, there is a slight hint of a smile, yet she seems disengaged. Eyes are focused downwards which is always a bit strange, she appears to be day dreaming, oblivious to her surroundings. Though I generally don't recommend it, it may work to have her directly engage the viewer. The background is good, however I think a more detailed "solid" background would be more suitable over a wispy smoke background, but I won't know until I see it.
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